kokujin 558 Posted September 12, 2018 Share Posted September 12, 2018 for 15+ years. I've knacked what's wrong with this guy. It was impressive when he first came out. A white guy that can rap. Whoaw. But it was clear after album 2 he was falling off, and it's been clear since REbirth this dude's a sinner to his white tendancies. Everything he writes is simple. Easy to understand. There's no inside meanings, and you never have to imagine he knows more about his ''rap swag' than you do. Just follow his similies rhymes and tricks. Look folks, it's not difficult to rhyme. It is to tell a collague of feelings and insight, into a world that hip hop is supposed to feel like an insiders course. also, poetry [Chorus: Peter Cottontale & Chance the Rapper]What I'm trying to sayThat I'll (that I'll)Always (always)Always love youBreaking love is not like breaking up It takes some making loveIt takes some waking up early and making baconIt takes scripture chasing seeing Nathan When you've both been saving up Patience, perseverance Waiting, dating Taking blatant disrespect from groupies Goofies hating Hear my love jack Hand on my heart jack Hand me my shotMy shit is so conditional yeah y'allFall out every time the caller drop Y'all might need a better otterboxBreaking love is not like breaking up Cause ain't no breaking love It ain't no faking love It''s give and take in love Man it won't break us, made of faith and Savior's blood Babe we ain't breaking up dats poetry maign. use of otterbox for phone. Some God scriptures and reverence. Waking up seing nathan instead of saying nothing. Breaking love is not like Breaking up. The message MESSAGE is stronger than the rhyme. Em never fucking does this! I ain't change my number since the seventh gradeThis for my day one, ten years, seven daysA week, nigga's never tired on they Kevin GatesAnd if they rest in peace they bunny hopping heaven's gatesIt's too many young angels on the southsideGot us scared to let our grandmommas outsideYou gonna make me take the campers way downtownYou gonna make me turn my BM to my housewifeI just had a growth spurtIt done took so long, my tippy toes hurtYou can keep the nose ring, I don't have to soul searchI'm still at my old church, only ever sold merchGrandma say I'm Kosher, momma say I'm cultureGCI, 107.5, angel goin' livePower 92, angel, juke, angel gon' jukeGCI, 107.5, goin' livePower 92, angel gon' juke, juke, juke, juke What is GCI 107.5? angel goin' live? Power 92? angel gon juke juke juke? THAT'S CONFIDENCE in their own world, and they can remain vague about it and put it in a damn song and it VIBES. It gives you a slim taste of the BLACK WORLD. And it does phonetically fit the song. Em tho? He has no confidence. Everything has to fit a technical piece. There's absolutely no lingo in Em's songs where I wonder "what's he leading on to? I wish I was apart of his world to understand it... cooool." Also, the King of vague wisdom Jigga man JAY-Z Lyrics: “I got the feds sending me letters 'cause I'm schooling the youth. But they can't lock me down 'cause my tool is the truth. Yeah I sold drugs for a living, that's a given. Why is it? Why don't y'all try to visit the neighborhoods I lived in? My mind been through hell, my neighborhood is crime central where cops lock you more than try to defend you. I push you to the limit when I'm needing the wealth. And all I see is life cycle just repeatin' itself.” story and mood and picture over phonetic rhymes. Always. I'm a gorilla in the fuckin' coupeFinna pull up in the zooI'm like Chief Keef meet Rafiki, who been lyin' "King" to you?Pocket, watch it, like kangaroosTell these clowns we ain't amused'Nana clips for that monkey business, 4-5 got change for youMotor cade when we came throughPresidential with the planes tooOne better get you with the residentialUndefeated with the cane tooI said no to the Superbowl, you need me, I don't need youEvery night we in the endzone, tell the NFL we in stadiums tooLast night was a fuckin' zooStagedivin' in a pool of peopleRan through Liverpool like a fuckin' BeatleSmoke gorilla glue like it's fuckin' legalTell the Grammy's fuck that 0 for 8 shitHave you ever seen the crowd goin' apeshit? (Rah) No try-hard rhyme schemes. The ability to use "I said no to the suberbowl, you need me, I don't need you" (it doesn't even rhyme there). every line is saturated and has 2-3 layers behind it. I'm too lazy to even look up more vague story shit by Jay. But Em, is like 1-2-3, 3squared-2-1. 5-6-7/8 - 56-7/88888. Other rappers are like 1-2.5, 1-3,@#$#@rap lingo, Jay be like oh jeez I need his lifestyle to understand thisone 1-5 -- this just rhymed. Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Popular Post Voidler 1,675 Posted September 12, 2018 Popular Post Share Posted September 12, 2018 He’s nervous. On the surface LowTCP looked calm and ready To drop bombs. But he but he keeps on forgetting How to format what he copies down, the whole SW goes so loud He copies his favourite lyrics down, but the words wont paste down He's choking, how? Everybody's joking now The clock's run out, time's up, over—blaow! 2 4 Quote Link to post Share on other sites
kokujin 558 Posted September 12, 2018 Author Share Posted September 12, 2018 ^ sphegetti rhymes. Quote Link to post Share on other sites
kokujin 558 Posted September 12, 2018 Author Share Posted September 12, 2018 Plow down.bloaw how Choking holding gsgsgdging. He similies with.ing enders and the ow[n] words. Siiiiimple. Siiiiimple. Took book rook shook plus high bye i lie on the inside = freminem Quote Link to post Share on other sites
kaz 2,439 Posted September 12, 2018 Share Posted September 12, 2018 I agree spaghetti is all I can think of reading this shit Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Cooke 2,026 Posted September 12, 2018 Share Posted September 12, 2018 8 mile could never be made in 2018 because everyone would want the main character to be black, other wise it's a cultural appropriation. 2 1 1 1 Quote Link to post Share on other sites
kokujin 558 Posted September 12, 2018 Author Share Posted September 12, 2018 (edited) 7 minutes ago, Cookester15 said: 8 mile could never be made in 2018 because everyone would want the main character to be black, other wise it's a cultural appropriation. Im glad that affected you, sweetheart. Edited September 12, 2018 by kokujin Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Boss 70 Posted September 12, 2018 Share Posted September 12, 2018 9 minutes ago, Cookester15 said: 8 mile could never be made in 2018 because everyone would want the main character to be black, other wise it's a cultural appropriation. Quote Link to post Share on other sites
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kokujin 558 Posted September 13, 2018 Author Share Posted September 13, 2018 He has a point/rant somewhere in there. Hes upset blackie representation hurt him. Tho 8 mile is about... nevermind. Quote Link to post Share on other sites
kaz 2,439 Posted September 13, 2018 Share Posted September 13, 2018 1 minute ago, kokujin said: He has a point/rant somewhere in there. Hes upset blackie representation hurt him. Tho 8 mile is about... nevermind. don't worry nobody is upset because white rapper suck Quote Link to post Share on other sites
102020393023445948594 2,223 Posted September 13, 2018 Share Posted September 13, 2018 he's washed up. Even MGK is beating up on him nowadays. 1 Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Spicalicious 128 Posted September 13, 2018 Share Posted September 13, 2018 It's about his talent to be able to rap the way he does. Not about how good his rhymes are... I'd like to see you rap like he did in the song rap god. He's able to do that and not many others can. Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Cooke 2,026 Posted September 13, 2018 Share Posted September 13, 2018 Eminem is deader than Mac miller 1 Quote Link to post Share on other sites
The Mother Fucker 26 Posted September 13, 2018 Share Posted September 13, 2018 Eazy-E would murder both of those fools. Eazy would know Eminem came up from that Bitch ass Dre. Quote Link to post Share on other sites
TLHBO 2,160 Posted September 13, 2018 Share Posted September 13, 2018 Eminem is a has-been faggot. Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Cooke 2,026 Posted September 13, 2018 Share Posted September 13, 2018 Slim shady sounds like a black man's name Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Cooke 2,026 Posted September 13, 2018 Share Posted September 13, 2018 And eminems are coloureds Quote Link to post Share on other sites
McWicked 825 Posted September 13, 2018 Share Posted September 13, 2018 19 hours ago, Cookester15 said: 8 mile could never be made in 2018 because everyone would want the main character to be black, other wise it's a cultural appropriation. You know 8 Mile was loosely based on Eminem's life, right? Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Cooke 2,026 Posted September 13, 2018 Share Posted September 13, 2018 2 minutes ago, McWickedSmawt85 said: You know 8 Mile was loosely based on Eminem's life, right? That was the joke Quote Link to post Share on other sites
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