Cooke 2,026 Posted September 5, 2021 Share Posted September 5, 2021 https://www.bandlab.com/revisions/b0aededf-410c-ec11-981f-a04a5e798978 https://www.bandlab.com/revisions/e9b752d9-0e0d-ec11-981f-a04a5e798978 https://www.bandlab.com/revisions/d1c6bdf0-9300-ec11-b563-a04a5e796c42 https://www.bandlab.com/revisions/99080b21-4702-ec11-b563-a04a5e796c42 https://www.bandlab.com/revisions/f05f20fa-fa00-ec11-b563-a04a5e796c42 🙂 1 Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Cooke 2,026 Posted September 6, 2021 Author Share Posted September 6, 2021 Someone tell me they are terrible please Quote Link to post Share on other sites
jehurey 3,227 Posted September 7, 2021 Share Posted September 7, 2021 i never even listened to that previous thread, which might have been like 3-4 months ago maybe. i was going to get around to that one, but forgot. Quote Link to post Share on other sites
jehurey 3,227 Posted September 7, 2021 Share Posted September 7, 2021 On 2021-09-05 at 2:15 AM, Cooke said: https://www.bandlab.com/revisions/b0aededf-410c-ec11-981f-a04a5e798978 There's alot to like here. I actually like the background white noise. Obviously its because its a limitation of where you are recording at, but it makes it seem more genuine, like you're being recorded in a warehouse space. The acoustic guitar sounds really Led Zeppelin III, but obviously without the southern blues-ey twanging. Love how you are developing really pleasant pauses or letting a note just ring out for a 2-3 seconds before starting to play again. Its sounds confident, like you enjoyed that note so much, that you decided to let it hang it there. I started to like what you were doing from 45 seconds onward, but it got a little messy and convoluted around the 55 second mark for the next 8-10 seconds. Would have sounded nice if the music was escalating sorta like in "Baby I'm Gonna Leave You" before they hit the main chorus. Also, that note that you stumble upon at the 1:13, that has a lovely hint of darkness, you need to expand on that. That would make like a nice little section by itself before returning back to the previous notes. Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Cooke 2,026 Posted September 7, 2021 Author Share Posted September 7, 2021 29 minutes ago, jehurey said: There's alot to like here. I actually like the background white noise. Obviously its because its a limitation of where you are recording at, but it makes it seem more genuine, like you're being recorded in a warehouse space. The acoustic guitar sounds really Led Zeppelin III, but obviously without the southern blues-ey twanging. Love how you are developing really pleasant pauses or letting a note just ring out for a 2-3 seconds before starting to play again. Its sounds confident, like you enjoyed that note so much, that you decided to let it hang it there. I started to like what you were doing from 45 seconds onward, but it got a little messy and convoluted around the 55 second mark for the next 8-10 seconds. Would have sounded nice if the music was escalating sorta like in "Baby I'm Gonna Leave You" before they hit the main chorus. Also, that note that you stumble upon at the 1:13, that has a lovely hint of darkness, you need to expand on that. That would make like a nice little section by itself before returning back to the previous notes. Interesting, my dad said it sounded like zeppelin too. Thanks for listening. Yes the sound quality isn't always great, it's just with my phone mic Quote Link to post Share on other sites
kaz 2,439 Posted September 7, 2021 Share Posted September 7, 2021 maybe listen to it later 🙃 Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Cooke 2,026 Posted September 7, 2021 Author Share Posted September 7, 2021 25 minutes ago, kaz said: maybe listen to it later 🙃 Yeah right 1 Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Cooke 2,026 Posted September 19, 2021 Author Share Posted September 19, 2021 (edited) https://www.bandlab.com/jester151/thunder-donkeys-5d22be65?revId=17be9151-f118-ec11-981f-a04a5e798978 (Thunder Donkeys) Edited September 21, 2021 by Cooke Quote Link to post Share on other sites
102020393023445948594 2,223 Posted September 20, 2021 Share Posted September 20, 2021 (edited) would you say they sound like... a Brazilian booty shaker? Edited September 20, 2021 by Body Count 1 Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Cooke 2,026 Posted September 20, 2021 Author Share Posted September 20, 2021 A Colombian cunt circus Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Cooke 2,026 Posted September 20, 2021 Author Share Posted September 20, 2021 https://www.bandlab.com/jester151/confrontation-a9fa627c?revId=930e9929-5c1a-ec11-981f-a04a5e798978 1 Quote Link to post Share on other sites
kaz 2,439 Posted September 21, 2021 Share Posted September 21, 2021 (edited) fuck man, im sorry i forgot soon 🙃 I listened to all of your other stuff before. you know that Edited September 21, 2021 by kaz Quote Link to post Share on other sites
MalaXmaS 646 Posted September 21, 2021 Share Posted September 21, 2021 Terrible, bland and like nails on chalkboard. Quote Link to post Share on other sites
kaz 2,439 Posted September 21, 2021 Share Posted September 21, 2021 1 hour ago, MalaXmaS said: Terrible, bland and like nails on chalkboard. nobody asked you to post your self evaluation you fucking cunt Quote Link to post Share on other sites
kaz 2,439 Posted September 21, 2021 Share Posted September 21, 2021 (edited) from the beginning is mild. 12:01 is okay, sounds like it isn't done yet, this could be really cool. I like your ambient, like that one song you did, cat & dogs empire or whatever 😁 when will it rain is okay, I was hoping for a twist. august night is eehh outerwild has some nice vibes, first some western feel after that completely different. kinda cool. thunder donkeys just isn't my style, I like the drums tho. I think someone like GD might appreciate it. edison's bulb I like it a lot, that shit sounds so weird edith says: I meant this one https://www.bandlab.com/post/3b9ddb60c551e91180f428187831ee7a_25d3fbf98171eb1198890050f28a50ba this is really such a good tune. i will put it on my phone ☺️ Edited September 21, 2021 by kaz Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Cooke 2,026 Posted September 21, 2021 Author Share Posted September 21, 2021 1 hour ago, kaz said: from the beginning is mild. 12:01 is okay, sounds like it isn't done yet, this could be really cool. I like your ambient, like that one song you did, cat & dogs empire or whatever 😁 when will it rain is okay, I was hoping for a twist. august night is eehh outerwild has some nice vibes, first some western feel after that completely different. kinda cool. thunder donkeys just isn't my style, I like the drums tho. I think someone like GD might appreciate it. edison's bulb I like it a lot, that shit sounds so weird edith says: I meant this one https://www.bandlab.com/post/3b9ddb60c551e91180f428187831ee7a_25d3fbf98171eb1198890050f28a50ba this is really such a good tune. i will put it on my phone ☺️ thanks for listening! I think i should go back to galactic empire of space dogs and touch it up. the Piano is too quiet i think. 1 Quote Link to post Share on other sites
kaz 2,439 Posted September 22, 2021 Share Posted September 22, 2021 4 hours ago, Cooke said: thanks for listening! I think i should go back to galactic empire of space dogs and touch it up. the Piano is too quiet i think. whatever you do with that track keep the version you have right now for backup. I think you should work on 12:01. I really like the sound of it but it doesn't seem complete. you are very talented, cookey 😌. you do a lot of different stuff and that I prefer your ambient is just my taste, others might enjoy your guitar tunes more which are also really good. don't stop. Quote Link to post Share on other sites
TLHBO 2,158 Posted September 22, 2021 Share Posted September 22, 2021 23 hours ago, MalaXmaS said: Terrible, bland and like nails on chalkboard. Sounds like a typical Xbox game. 1 Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Cooke 2,026 Posted September 22, 2021 Author Share Posted September 22, 2021 7 minutes ago, kaz said: whatever you do with that track keep the version you have right now for backup. I think you should work on 12:01. I really like the sound of it but it doesn't seem complete. you are very talented, cookey 😌. you do a lot of different stuff and that I prefer your ambient is just my taste, others might enjoy your guitar tunes more which are also really good. don't stop. I will make an ambient dark track for you right now 1 Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Cooke 2,026 Posted September 22, 2021 Author Share Posted September 22, 2021 (edited) @kaz https://www.bandlab.com/revisions/8052aa3d-551b-ec11-981f-a04a5e798978 Edited September 22, 2021 by Cooke 1 Quote Link to post Share on other sites
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