Cooke 2,061 Posted May 6 Share Posted May 6 (edited) https://www.bandlab.com/track/ebd5aafa-e80b-ef11-96f5-000d3a425266?revId=ead5aafa-e80b-ef11-96f5-000d3a425266 Thank you 🙏 Edited May 6 by Cooke 2 Link to post Share on other sites
-GD-X★ 8,306 Posted May 6 Share Posted May 6 Dig the airy blues rock with a hint of deserted island vibes. Link to post Share on other sites
Cooke 2,061 Posted May 6 Author Share Posted May 6 14 minutes ago, -GD-X said: Dig the airy blues rock with a hint of deserted island vibes. Drenched in reverb. Yeah that's what i was going for. Thanks Link to post Share on other sites
jehurey 3,318 Posted May 6 Share Posted May 6 That sounds very great, and a well-constructed backing track that feels organic and dances around just enough with each loop. I would say that your free-styling guitar is too low, and should be more prominent and in front, and obviously do more free-styling playing. That interlude in the middle, eh. I don't really like it. It feels like something that should be a completely different song. It turn returns back to building the same riff again, but I would say that it ends early when it should get more louder and harder-driving, even it if sounds repetitive, until it comes to loud, abrupt, reverb-ey ending. Should probably be about 45-60 seconds longer. Link to post Share on other sites
Cooke 2,061 Posted May 6 Author Share Posted May 6 35 minutes ago, jehurey said: That sounds very great, and a well-constructed backing track that feels organic and dances around just enough with each loop. I would say that your free-styling guitar is too low, and should be more prominent and in front, and obviously do more free-styling playing. That interlude in the middle, eh. I don't really like it. It feels like something that should be a completely different song. It turn returns back to building the same riff again, but I would say that it ends early when it should get more louder and harder-driving, even it if sounds repetitive, until it comes to loud, abrupt, reverb-ey ending. Should probably be about 45-60 seconds longer. Yeah you're right. I'll build up the ending and yes the lead guitar is drowned out a bit. Link to post Share on other sites
Cooke 2,061 Posted May 6 Author Share Posted May 6 https://www.bandlab.com/post/ebd5aafa-e80b-ef11-96f5-000d3a425266 I think this is it. Link to post Share on other sites
MalaXmaS 705 Posted May 6 Share Posted May 6 Not bad. You should make videogame music. Link to post Share on other sites
Cooke 2,061 Posted May 6 Author Share Posted May 6 1 hour ago, MalaXmaS said: Not bad. You should make videogame music. Thanks. I'm not good enough for that 😔 Link to post Share on other sites
Cooke 2,061 Posted May 7 Author Share Posted May 7 On 2024-05-05 at 8:05 PM, jehurey said: That sounds very great, and a well-constructed backing track that feels organic and dances around just enough with each loop. I would say that your free-styling guitar is too low, and should be more prominent and in front, and obviously do more free-styling playing. That interlude in the middle, eh. I don't really like it. It feels like something that should be a completely different song. It turn returns back to building the same riff again, but I would say that it ends early when it should get more louder and harder-driving, even it if sounds repetitive, until it comes to loud, abrupt, reverb-ey ending. Should probably be about 45-60 seconds longer. I believe I've made it better Link to post Share on other sites
MalaXmaS 705 Posted May 7 Share Posted May 7 12 hours ago, Cooke said: Thanks. I'm not good enough for that 😔 No, I think you are. Start by offering it to indie developers. Link to post Share on other sites
Cooke 2,061 Posted May 22 Author Share Posted May 22 https://www.bandlab.com/post/d373860d-f417-ef11-96f5-000d3a425266 Final version. Fixed the ending and levels 😀 Link to post Share on other sites
Cooke 2,061 Posted May 24 Author Share Posted May 24 https://www.bandlab.com/post/dc323f32-5882-ee11-b75e-000d3a428fff @jehurey please review. Link to post Share on other sites
Cooke 2,061 Posted May 27 Author Share Posted May 27 https://www.bandlab.com/post/398d9b48-df1b-ef11-96f5-000d3a425266 The Rebirth Link to post Share on other sites
Cooke 2,061 Posted May 29 Author Share Posted May 29 (edited) https://www.bandlab.com/post/36658a2e-371e-ef11-96f5-000d3a425266 Distant Shores This one is a bit of a trip. Edited May 30 by Cooke Link to post Share on other sites
Cooke 2,061 Posted May 30 Author Share Posted May 30 Listen you cunts! Link to post Share on other sites
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