I've made a new song. Please listen.

[Cooke 2,061]

https://www.bandlab.com/track/ebd5aafa-e80b-ef11-96f5-000d3a425266?revId=ead5aafa-e80b-ef11-96f5-000d3a425266

Thank you 🙏 

Edited May 6 by Cooke

[-GD-X★ 8,306]

Dig the airy blues rock with a hint of deserted island vibes.

[Cooke 2,061]

14 minutes ago, -GD-X said:

Dig the airy blues rock with a hint of deserted island vibes.

Drenched in reverb. Yeah that's what i was going for. Thanks 

[jehurey 3,318]

That sounds very great, and a well-constructed backing track that feels organic and dances around just enough with each loop.

 

I would say that your free-styling guitar is too low, and should be more prominent and in front, and obviously do more free-styling playing.

 

That interlude in the middle, eh. I don't really like it. It feels like something that should be a completely different song.

 

It turn returns back to building the same riff again, but I would say that it ends early when it should get more louder and harder-driving, even it if sounds repetitive, until it comes to loud, abrupt, reverb-ey ending. Should probably be about 45-60 seconds longer.

[Hot Sauce 2,836]

I dig it. 

[Cooke 2,061]

35 minutes ago, jehurey said:

That sounds very great, and a well-constructed backing track that feels organic and dances around just enough with each loop.

 

I would say that your free-styling guitar is too low, and should be more prominent and in front, and obviously do more free-styling playing.

 

That interlude in the middle, eh. I don't really like it. It feels like something that should be a completely different song.

 

It turn returns back to building the same riff again, but I would say that it ends early when it should get more louder and harder-driving, even it if sounds repetitive, until it comes to loud, abrupt, reverb-ey ending. Should probably be about 45-60 seconds longer.

Yeah you're right. I'll build up the ending and yes the lead guitar is drowned out a bit. 

[Cooke 2,061]

https://www.bandlab.com/post/ebd5aafa-e80b-ef11-96f5-000d3a425266

I think this is it. 

[MalaXmaS 705]

Not bad.

You should make videogame music.

[Cooke 2,061]

1 hour ago, MalaXmaS said:

Not bad.

You should make videogame music.

Thanks. I'm not good enough for that 😔 

[Cooke 2,061]

On 2024-05-05 at 8:05 PM, jehurey said:

That sounds very great, and a well-constructed backing track that feels organic and dances around just enough with each loop.

 

I would say that your free-styling guitar is too low, and should be more prominent and in front, and obviously do more free-styling playing.

 

That interlude in the middle, eh. I don't really like it. It feels like something that should be a completely different song.

 

It turn returns back to building the same riff again, but I would say that it ends early when it should get more louder and harder-driving, even it if sounds repetitive, until it comes to loud, abrupt, reverb-ey ending. Should probably be about 45-60 seconds longer.

I believe I've made it better 

[MalaXmaS 705]

12 hours ago, Cooke said:

Thanks. I'm not good enough for that 😔 

No, I think you are. 

Start by offering it to indie developers. 

[Cooke 2,061]

https://www.bandlab.com/post/d373860d-f417-ef11-96f5-000d3a425266

 

Final version. Fixed the ending and levels 😀

[Cooke 2,061]

https://www.bandlab.com/post/dc323f32-5882-ee11-b75e-000d3a428fff

 

@jehurey please review. 

[Cooke 2,061]

https://www.bandlab.com/post/398d9b48-df1b-ef11-96f5-000d3a425266

 

The Rebirth 

[Cooke 2,061]

https://www.bandlab.com/post/36658a2e-371e-ef11-96f5-000d3a425266

 

 

Distant Shores

 

This one is a bit of a trip. 

Edited May 30 by Cooke

[Cooke 2,061]

Listen you cunts!