Cooke 2,041 Posted May 6 Share Posted May 6 (edited) https://www.bandlab.com/track/ebd5aafa-e80b-ef11-96f5-000d3a425266?revId=ead5aafa-e80b-ef11-96f5-000d3a425266 Thank you 🙏 Edited May 6 by Cooke 2 Quote Link to post Share on other sites
-GD-X★ 7,814 Posted May 6 Share Posted May 6 Dig the airy blues rock with a hint of deserted island vibes. Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Cooke 2,041 Posted May 6 Author Share Posted May 6 14 minutes ago, -GD-X said: Dig the airy blues rock with a hint of deserted island vibes. Drenched in reverb. Yeah that's what i was going for. Thanks Quote Link to post Share on other sites
jehurey 3,299 Posted May 6 Share Posted May 6 That sounds very great, and a well-constructed backing track that feels organic and dances around just enough with each loop. I would say that your free-styling guitar is too low, and should be more prominent and in front, and obviously do more free-styling playing. That interlude in the middle, eh. I don't really like it. It feels like something that should be a completely different song. It turn returns back to building the same riff again, but I would say that it ends early when it should get more louder and harder-driving, even it if sounds repetitive, until it comes to loud, abrupt, reverb-ey ending. Should probably be about 45-60 seconds longer. Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Cooke 2,041 Posted May 6 Author Share Posted May 6 35 minutes ago, jehurey said: That sounds very great, and a well-constructed backing track that feels organic and dances around just enough with each loop. I would say that your free-styling guitar is too low, and should be more prominent and in front, and obviously do more free-styling playing. That interlude in the middle, eh. I don't really like it. It feels like something that should be a completely different song. It turn returns back to building the same riff again, but I would say that it ends early when it should get more louder and harder-driving, even it if sounds repetitive, until it comes to loud, abrupt, reverb-ey ending. Should probably be about 45-60 seconds longer. Yeah you're right. I'll build up the ending and yes the lead guitar is drowned out a bit. Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Cooke 2,041 Posted May 6 Author Share Posted May 6 https://www.bandlab.com/post/ebd5aafa-e80b-ef11-96f5-000d3a425266 I think this is it. Quote Link to post Share on other sites
MalaXmaS 651 Posted May 6 Share Posted May 6 Not bad. You should make videogame music. Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Cooke 2,041 Posted May 6 Author Share Posted May 6 1 hour ago, MalaXmaS said: Not bad. You should make videogame music. Thanks. I'm not good enough for that 😔 Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Cooke 2,041 Posted May 7 Author Share Posted May 7 On 2024-05-05 at 8:05 PM, jehurey said: That sounds very great, and a well-constructed backing track that feels organic and dances around just enough with each loop. I would say that your free-styling guitar is too low, and should be more prominent and in front, and obviously do more free-styling playing. That interlude in the middle, eh. I don't really like it. It feels like something that should be a completely different song. It turn returns back to building the same riff again, but I would say that it ends early when it should get more louder and harder-driving, even it if sounds repetitive, until it comes to loud, abrupt, reverb-ey ending. Should probably be about 45-60 seconds longer. I believe I've made it better Quote Link to post Share on other sites
MalaXmaS 651 Posted May 7 Share Posted May 7 12 hours ago, Cooke said: Thanks. I'm not good enough for that 😔 No, I think you are. Start by offering it to indie developers. Quote Link to post Share on other sites
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